ext_7376 ([identity profile] curiouswombat.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] ffutures 2015-11-10 02:05 pm (UTC)

Hmm - until I got down to the braided hair knot it seemed quite 1920s English gentlemen abroad, or possibly Americans exploring their own continent.

The knotted hair on a male made me rethink to Japanese - then to the possibility of native American.

Or it is actually a fantasy piece and could be set anywhere and anywhen. Even Sci-fi ... Ringworld anyone?

What happens next? I think that depends on what their relationship had been established as before the passage started. It could lead into a love scene, but could just lead to awkward laughter and bacon and egg cooked once they relit the fire.

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