Getting Melodramatic

[ffutures]

I've put the revised melodrama appendix for the FF rules on line, a condensed version of some of the stuff in FF VI. I'd be grateful if people could take a look and suggest ways of cutting it further, since it is VERY long; one idea I'm considering is to have a single table of traits covering everybody, with the modifications for each type of character shown, but I think that would make it less clear.

If you spot anything please comment - preferably say where it occurs in the text and give the existing and changed wording you're suggesting. Please DON'T post an edited version of the entire thing as your comment - LJ won't let you anyway. Warning, it's about 10,000 words!


Getting Melodramatic