ext_13490 ([identity profile] nojay.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] ffutures 2011-08-09 10:13 am (UTC)

Couple of typos and odd bits:

[These being given with a tiger appended,]

Is "tiger" the correct word here, some figure of speech?

[girl to whom lie was betrothed]

lie = he

There's also an image missing with a Photobucket error, at "A Warning from Oxford".

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