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[ffutures]

This is going to have to be the final version for now, at least until after Dragonmeet. Taking on board comments and hair suggestions from previous versions, I think this is about as good as I'm going to get without spending much more time in it than I can afford.

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[nelc.livejournal.com]

I don't think the direction of the shadows on the Martian surface and Our Lady of Grantham match very well: the Mars rocks are being illuminated from the left, while Maggie looks like she's being lit from our right. But I think if you flip the head around and darken the shadows it'll work out.

[nelc.livejournal.com]

Alternatively, switch the Mars-scape around, so that Maggie's hair swirls the right way.

[ffutures.livejournal.com]

Thanks - this is probably doable, especially if I switch the foreground only. I'll give it a shot.

[ffutures.livejournal.com]

A bit better I think, this really is going to have to be it for now, at least until after Dragonmeet.