Oh, I like it. I was wondering about the story just the other day. It's a chapter you have to keep reading because the beginning, especially after such a break is a little confusing. (It seems like something I've read before.) But the planning is sound, the ending with Holtz makes me quite eager for the next chapter again. (I suppose I'll have to get over that before the next one is actually written, but still.)
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Date: 2005-03-26 03:53 pm (UTC)It's a chapter you have to keep reading because the beginning, especially after such a break is a little confusing. (It seems like something I've read before.)
But the planning is sound, the ending with Holtz makes me quite eager for the next chapter again. (I suppose I'll have to get over that before the next one is actually written, but still.)