You've got a minor typo: During Ethan's invocation, you have the words "where one there had been a tattoo," which I think should be "where once there had been a tattoo."
It seems that you're crossing the Marvel Cinematic Universe continuity over either with the X-men films or with the comics universe, as my understanding is that the MCU has no mutants. I assume that's intentional?
I'm sorry not to see Buffy meeting Steve Rogers; that would be an interesting encounter. Perhaps we can see it in some future story?
On Vi and the hammer, as I recall the exact wording is "if he be worthy." So that implies that Vi is worthy in a way the other slayers aren't—just as Beta Ray Bill was worthy long ago. That seems like another potential plothook. . . .
Obviously this one isn't the end of the arc! I look forward to the next one.
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Date: 2014-07-24 10:09 pm (UTC)It seems that you're crossing the Marvel Cinematic Universe continuity over either with the X-men films or with the comics universe, as my understanding is that the MCU has no mutants. I assume that's intentional?
I'm sorry not to see Buffy meeting Steve Rogers; that would be an interesting encounter. Perhaps we can see it in some future story?
On Vi and the hammer, as I recall the exact wording is "if he be worthy." So that implies that Vi is worthy in a way the other slayers aren't—just as Beta Ray Bill was worthy long ago. That seems like another potential plothook. . . .
Obviously this one isn't the end of the arc! I look forward to the next one.