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Just a little idea that came to me, a coincidence of timing that seemed worth exploring. Warning, character death.




Why We Fight

by Marcus Rowland

The midnight subway reeks of despair, the people sparse, suffocated by apathy and despair. They banned their heroes, buried them with the Keene act, then wondered at the results. Crime rising, more vandalism, graffiti, litter. Maybe The Comedian was right, and all that is left is the cleansing nuclear fire. Maybe. I choose to think otherwise, refuse to let Keene bury me. I move amongst them, unknown, unnoticed. If I wore my true face it would be different. For now I choose only to watch and listen, study the faces of the sheep and look for the wolves amongst them.

There. Moving through the station towards the trains. A woman, late teens or early twenties, black, black leather coat, close cropped curly hair, white bead necklace. She moves like a hunter, stalking someone ahead of her. A bleached blond punk, looking back and laughing. He knows she's there, doesn't fear her. She doesn't smile, shows no emotion. Whatever game this is, she isn't playing. I follow them to the train, watch her follow him. They move forward through the train, looking for something. An empty car, of course. As soon as they enter the fight begins. I watch through the window from the next car, neither notices.

Both are strong, stronger than any normal human. They're wrecking the car. I look round and find myself alone. I pull on my true face and my gloves, and open the door. Lights dangle from the ceiling, broken, seats torn and wrenched from their frames. The woman pants, but fights as fiercely as ever. The punk isn't even breathing hard. She's on him now, pinning him to the floor, something in her hand... some sort of weapon, wood. There's a moment of darkness and he's on top. The weapon's gone. He hears the door shut behind me and glances up. Suddenly he's snarling, his face inhuman, bestial, his hands at her throat. No time to reach them but I have Daniel's gift. I fire, and the grapnel strikes his shoulder, the hooks embedded in his flesh. He pulls back, forgetting the woman, as I belay the cord around a support pole and wrench him towards me. Instead of fighting, he twists round towards me and charges. Behind him the woman seems to leap to her feet, stoops, and throws. He's nearly on me when he crumbles to dust.

"You're him," says the woman. No fear in her voice, just surprise. "Rorshach." She knows the face, of course. Why isn't she frightened?

"Yes. That was a vampire?"

"Would you believe me if I said 'no?'"

"No games."

"Yes. He was a vampire. William the Bloody, Spike to his enemies."

"Spike?"

"He tortured people with railroad spikes."

The train shudders to a halt. End of the line. She jots something on a scrap of paper, her name, Nikki Wood, and a telephone number. She still isn't frightened. "You ever run into something like that, anything supernatural, gimme a call."

I take the paper, watch her leave, don't try to stop her. By the time I've rewound the grapnel line she's gone.

Weeks later I hear that a woman answering her name and description has been found dead, almost torn apart by something with several knives or razor-sharp claws. I wonder what was gained by my intervention, why we bother to fight.

Maybe The Comedian was right.

End.


Author's Note: in BtVS continuity Nikki Wood was killed by Spike in 1977. In Watchmen continuity the Keene Act banned vigilantes in the same year.



Comments please before I post to archives.

Date: 2005-10-26 12:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ludditerobot.livejournal.com
Hrmm....

Joking, of course.

Date: 2005-10-26 12:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kurukami.livejournal.com
Oooooh. Very interesting. I can definitely picture Rorshach's intervention in that matter, back in the days before he went down that cold lonely road. Of course, that little shift changes absolutely everything twenty years down the line... :)

Date: 2005-10-26 10:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ffutures.livejournal.com
He's already well on the road at this point, if I've got the timeline right. I think that the Roche kidnapping has already happened, though I need to check that.

Date: 2005-10-26 02:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kurukami.livejournal.com
Darn, I think I lent out my copy of Watchmen, or I could answer that question. :)

Date: 2005-10-27 07:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ffutures.livejournal.com
Roche kidnapping 75, Keene Act 77.

Of course Rorshach having proof of the supernatural does screw up his big soliloquay in The Watchmen, the scene where he's describing his reaction to the Roche kidnapping. I think we have to assume that over the years he's somehow rationalised the memory away.

Date: 2005-10-26 01:01 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] speakr2customrs.livejournal.com
I know absolutely nothing about the Watchmen universe - I'm not even totally sure what medium it's from, although I assume comics - but I liked the story.

However I believe that there is a slight error in BtVS continuity; in the subway fight I am 99% certain that Spike stayed in human face all the time, even when he killed Nikki.

Date: 2005-10-26 07:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ffutures.livejournal.com
Hmm... maybe you're right. I'll need to watch that scence again. Trouble is that Rorshach is (to put it bluntly) a racist, he needs a reason to help Nikki rather than Spike.

Maybe it's his reaction to seeing Rorschach. Easy enough to change that.

Oh, as for the genre, he's from The Watchmen by Alan Moore, possibly the best graphic novel ever.

Date: 2005-10-26 08:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ffutures.livejournal.com
Forgot the "hating women" part when I was describing Rorshach. Possibly the least sympathetic hero ever...

Date: 2005-10-26 09:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jgracio.livejournal.com
Very good. They don't make them like the Watchmen, do they?

Date: 2005-10-26 10:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ffutures.livejournal.com
Batman: The Dark Knight Returns came close, but not _that_ close, there's nothing else remotely like it.

Date: 2005-10-26 11:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jgracio.livejournal.com
And you get to see Batman whoop on Superman. But on the whole, I concur.

Date: 2005-10-26 02:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xxmagex.livejournal.com
Impressive. Rorshach was a favoriteof mine from the Watchmen. Been awhile since I read the mini series, Imight have to dig up a copy.

Date: 2005-10-26 06:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] orangemike.livejournal.com
I'm impressed.

Of course, the effects in the Buffyverse would be profound. But then, the Buffyverse crossed with the Watchman reality is itself a boggler.

Date: 2005-10-26 10:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] smallship1.livejournal.com
Not quite Rorschach's idiom, I think. Too sane, too fluent. Nice idea though.

Date: 2005-10-26 10:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] smallship1.livejournal.com
Though of course if it's before he went completely round the twist that would account for that...sorry.

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