HP/B5 Half-Drabble - Shadows Rising II

[ffutures]

Lots of people asked for a sequel to Shadows Rising. Then Twisting the Hellmouth put the story into quarantine because it was less than 100 words, so I decided to oblige...

50 word Harry Potter / Babylon Five half-drabble, sequel to Shadows Rising



Shadows Rising II

by Marcus L. Rowland

"The boy was here," said Dumbledore. "I can't understand what happened to him."

"Yesssss...." said Kosh.

"You know something?"

"Yesssss...."

"And?"

"Yesssss...."

"Could you be more specific?"

"Nooooo...."

"Fat lot of help you are!" shouted Dumbledore, apparating back to Hogwarts.

Kosh sighed. Why were the younger races always so impatient?

End.

Comments

[pengshui-master.livejournal.com]

I would change "the younger races" to just "the young" if you can find somewhere else to put the 50th word.

But just because I like the idea of describing Dumbledore as young.

[ffutures.livejournal.com]

Too confusing, I think.