Another illustration
Jan. 3rd, 2011 02:27 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
ffuturesThis one will probably be a smallish filler illo.
Not 100% sure of the wording of this, maybe it should be "if the Sirians try to invade," "when" sounds like it's inevitable.
I might try some variations on WW1 recruiting posters too.
Monday 12.30 PM - I've changed it to:
Where will YOU be
When the Sirians attack?
The Imperial Navy and Marines need YOU!
Join the fight TODAY!
I think the original was too verbose, this feels a bit more like a real recruiting poster. Thanks to![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
autopope for the header, and everyone else for their comments.
Not 100% sure of the wording of this, maybe it should be "if the Sirians try to invade," "when" sounds like it's inevitable.
I might try some variations on WW1 recruiting posters too.
Monday 12.30 PM - I've changed it to:
Where will YOU be
When the Sirians attack?
The Imperial Navy and Marines need YOU!
Join the fight TODAY!
I think the original was too verbose, this feels a bit more like a real recruiting poster. Thanks to
autopope for the header, and everyone else for their comments.
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Date: 2011-01-03 09:12 am (UTC)(Doesn't require a conditional, doesn't imply an enemy success in putting boots ashore.)
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Date: 2011-01-03 12:15 pm (UTC)