Too flippant?

[ffutures]

I'd like to have this conversation in the next part of The Key to Byzantium, but the circumstances in which SG-1 meet Willow (at a memorial) don't seem quite right. Does this seem in character for Willow and SG-1 if that's taken into account?



She looked at them, seemed to recognise Jack's face, and said "Colonel O'Neill?"

"Miss Rosenberg?"

"That's right. They'll be here for a while, if you'd like to come with me we can go somewhere a little quieter to talk. Want to introduce me?"

"Sorry. Major Samantha Carter, Doctor Daniel Jackson, and Murray."

"Murray?" said Willow, staring up at Teal'c. "Funny, you don't look Jewish."

"Indeed I am not," said Teal'c.

"In fact I'd have to say you don't feel exactly human."

"In fact I am not. I am a Jaffa."

"You're a city in Israel?"

"It's complicated," Jack said hastily. "Don't worry, he's one of the good guys."

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The edited version sounds smoother. It seems like Willow to be a smart ass comment would include something like a type of produce..